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Get out of here. Now. Please. by ~ChibiNightcrawler15:iconChibiNightcrawler15:


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Edit: I took off the kicked-puppy line. :D Does it look a little better, guys?

ADVANCED CRITIQUE PLEASE, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD! I love it when people comment, but I love it even MORE when people point out EXACTLY WHAT THEY LIKE about a picture, what could have been done better, etc. Seriously, please advanced critique. I'm very fond and very proud of this.

Like, most people are going to look at this and go "EEEEWWW, THAT PAIRING IS DISGUSTING"/"OMFG YOU TOTALLY RAPED A CLASSIC DISNEY MOVIE"/"WTF RIKU/SORA 4EVAR"/"THIS PIC SUCKS BECAUSE IT'S GAY" instead of looking at the things I'm most proud of: Sora's expression; how the desolate background, red lights, and their expression sets up a scene and a feeling of tension (it makes ME tense, anyway), and omfg, my favorite part. The shading on Tron's face. I swear to God, the apple of his cheek and his nose, and even his lips and "muzzle" have SO MUCH SHAPE. I am soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo pleased with this. Omgomgomgomg. I love that whenever I look at it, my chest freezes up and I feel like something's about to happen.


So please. If you don't like the pairing, at least comment on the other aspects of the picture. I'd really appreciate it.


XDDD Heehee, I got funny comments after I said that Tron/Sora slash was yummy. It's TOTALLY plausible, lieksrsly. :3 Not PROBABLE.....but plausible. XB


Really, though, I hope you KH fans and Tron fans alike like it. I do.


Advanced Critique, please!

Tron (c) Disney
Sora (c) Square Enix
Image (c) moi <3
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dude this is halarious LOL

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One that shouldn\'t exist in time is an error in the making
...how so? o_O

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Yami: Wait, Mokuba! You musn't do this thing! What would your brother say if he saw you now?
Kaiba: /Well done, Mokuba. Now steal something from Joey, too!/
Yami: Okay, but would he say if he /wasn't/ a complete douchebag.
well i didnt read your description(way toooo damn long and im wayyy tooooooo odamn lazy) anyway i just figured that *looked at title* tron hates the shit out of sora LOL

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One that shouldn\'t exist in time is an error in the making
>_< eeeeiiii, okay I'm a huge Tron addict (especially since I saw it when it came out...) but I'm all ? on KH... never played the game... ;_;

bbbuuuuutttt, (but with one t not two), I'm throughly enjoying the use of the color scheme to show the different emotions, the gggrrrrr on tron's face is so aggressive when compaired to the uh?!eek!huh? on sora's face... and the light, the subtle highlighting of red and blue clarify that so wonderfully! I've totally got the feeling of Seme and Uke from it :heart: and I must say the use of the characters expressions and the feeling of domination (my first yaoi was passive agressive characters...so this is right up my taste alley) versus the I-do'n-wan'na makes me want to look into this pairing!

And I like how the picture totally fades to black above their heads, emphasising their faces and them as the foreground! its a strong way of expressing them to the viewers!

L~

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The site of an iron man bleeding is irresistibly lurid... It is a sublime sight... Grand simply divine...

use a lower case "L" for the beginning of lshikawagoemon when findine me!
Love Tron's face a bunch, it IS very shapely but I'm confused about the hand with the digit sticking up. Is Sora giving the finger or is Tron trying to shush him up?

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Tron's trying to keep Sora from protesting. What about that hand confused you? I should change it so its owner and the gesture comes out a little clearer. :3



Thank you so much for that little critique/suggestion there, and I'm glad you like it. ^-^

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Yami: Wait, Mokuba! You musn't do this thing! What would your brother say if he saw you now?
Kaiba: /Well done, Mokuba. Now steal something from Joey, too!/
Yami: Okay, but would he say if he /wasn't/ a complete douchebag.
XDDDD I didn't mean for it to turn out like domination or anything. Something seriously bad is about to happen which might be potentially fatal to one or both of them (hence the 'omgdanger!' red light), and Tron is like "You need to leave. Now. Don't worry about me," as he wipes a tear of devastation from Sora's cheek. I meant for him to look more sad than aggressive, though he is acting very strongly. This was meant to be more of an angsty picture that INVOLVES a pairing rather than PORTRAYS a pairing, yes? (Concern instead of "OMGEATURFACE SEX<3") Perhaps I threw too much "NOW" into the "Please, go, for your safety" expression. @.@ Eeeeenooo!


But I really appreciate that you like the colors. ^_____^ I like the red on Sora's face. It makes him look more "OMG!!!!!?!?!NOOOO!!" and slowly losing it while Tron is calm and determined. And less was totally more in the background, and I love that you caught it. :3 <3333 ...does it look more like a floor, or a wall? @.@

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Yami: Wait, Mokuba! You musn't do this thing! What would your brother say if he saw you now?
Kaiba: /Well done, Mokuba. Now steal something from Joey, too!/
Yami: Okay, but would he say if he /wasn't/ a complete douchebag.
I've never seen the movie for Tron, so all I've got is seeing him in KHII. XD;;;

Anyway, although this pairing strikes me as a bit bizarre, I will admit, you're right. It's plausible. :3 And it really is a wonderful picture. Okay now that you're into Kingdom Hearts it makes me feel lame that you're not online as much because now I can't rant to you about various pairings that make me squeal/lawl.

OKAYTHEN. Like I said. Amaaaazing picture. In FACT. I think I'mma fave it. D:<
To be honest, I’ve never really liked this paring. I’ve seen plenty of pictures of it, but just never got what was so big about it. But in this piece of work, I couldn’t help but look at it for a good long while and think.

The coloring, the red light in the background, the way the darkness seems to be looming beyond them… Wow. It DOES make you feel like something HUGE is about to happen. I went on to read your description, and I was actually disappointed when you didn’t describe what was going on in the pic! XD I want to know what’s about to happen!

The facial expressions, the detail in the coloring and shading… It’s excellent! It’s very obvious that you put a lot of time and pride into this work. And it shows. What I like best would have to be the feeling of it as a whole. You want to know what’s going on and why it’s such a serious moment.

Great great work! It’s a thought-provoking piece to be sure! ^__^ The expressions are amazing!

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"Indeed, only with difficulty does one die for a just person, though perhaps for a good person one might even find courage to die." Romans 5:7
Never seen Tron until I played KH2. However, in this pic you captured the emotions between the two perfectly. I like how you did Sora's eyes. :D

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